lol I love multiple people asking about the fish

MAN, I think he should go after Fenneko tbfh, but yeah I don't get why he is so obsessed with Retsuko. Or how no one seems to have any interest in him at all... do you think the underbite suggests he's unattractive in the show's setting? Hm.

Good still but a bit anti-climactic, coulda been either more of an action scene or an "action" scene. Cliff-hangered too fast, if it went on a bit more to hint/foreshadow more of what they plan to do rather than closing it off on the laugh would have been better. It'd build a lot more suspense and hype for the next one if you lead us on a bit.

Still good stuff just kinda wish there was a bit more to this one, feels almost like a filler episode despite there being some plot progression... but all this progression is open ended with a lot hanging open.

Huh, well, I like it. I think it could stand some editing for dialogue, I think that it will get that since this is early alphas and such? The foundation is good, things seem good in general. I look forward to more and seeing how this evolves.

Promising... needs more content though. Is this abandoned???

hell, it's about time.

Very, very cool.

Heck, I love the background and such. Nice piece when its all put together.